Score: 6

"Beats Illin"

submission: 40 Caliber Poetry

date: December 23, 2009

Sick beat, but the rhymes are just ok. Your lyrics are pretty good but your flow needs some work. You should also record it all in one shot. good job i guess

Score: 10

"Oof"

submission: PJ - Warping

date: December 7, 2009

Buttery man. Straight fire. One of my favorites of yours.

Score: 6

"well..."

submission: Runnin' Out of Time(Album Ver)

date: December 7, 2009

The beats pretty crazy, and so is your rap. I get that you were trying to rap fast, but that doesn't make up for the lack of lyricism. As far as the verse goes, it was consistent one syllable rhyming with pretty average lyrics. I recommend listening to some Big L and Nas for a while and listen to how they establish their lyrics and rhyme scheme.

Score: 10

"Hot Track."

submission: EX!!! - Lucky

date: October 18, 2009

Nice sampling. Love the drums and when the piano kicks in. Tight stuff.

Flawless.

Score: 10

"Hot track."

submission: AJ: Funk Pusher named Bill

date: September 20, 2009

needs flow. HMMMMMM.

Score: 10

"Oh Boy!"

submission: SR - Pink Sky

date: September 20, 2009

do i have a treat for you amigo. stickin to the roots. nice oldschool.

Score: 10

"pumpin' bass."

submission: Unmanned Aerial Snowflake

date: September 20, 2009

Shoot to chill, I dig that. this sounds a little more modern then old school, but it's still ill. good stuff.

Score: 9

"So good."

submission: {Gatts}

date: July 14, 2009

So many kids making such sick beats on NG. It's UnBelievable. good shit.
one love.

Score: 9

"Sick beat."

submission: The Essence

date: July 14, 2009

Lyrics are pretty good. The first verse's flow gotta little choppy, but other then that, nice rap.

Score: 9

"Dope."

submission: Backfist Spit

date: July 14, 2009

Sick rhymes. You had a pretty consistent flow throughout the whole thing. Keep rhyming.
One Love.