my goodnesss.
dope dude. definitely some 9th wonder shit in the making. i feel like it could use some more sounds, but than again i love it the way it is. this is mad professional.
my goodnesss.
dope dude. definitely some 9th wonder shit in the making. i feel like it could use some more sounds, but than again i love it the way it is. this is mad professional.
Thanks for the review. Some more sounds? ehhhhh maybe :P
its ight.
good sound and flow. lyrics definitely need work man. their dope in the beginning, but you definitely fall off in the second half as far as lyrics go. sometimes i can't hear the rhyme you were going for too.
"Oncoming of Cynical Principles"
mhm..
also, being popular isn't everything man. 50's one of the most popular rappers, and i think he's trash. just saying.
p.s.= battle terrorcatta if you think you'd murk him. he's tight.
thanks bro! :). i know being popular isn't everything though. i just do this shit for me, and for example this song, i just wanted to try something new. i like doing new stuff on each one of my songs. but thanks for the review. not a 50 fan either :P. i dont listen to that much rap actually. im more into, indie alternative or techno stuff :P haha
its ight
just keep writing. thats all you can do, you almost got it, but some of it sounds really off. you'll get it one of these days, you got decent lyrics, even if you use the same words some times. i personally hate when ppl just put words that rhyme at the end of every line with little to no creativity. IE Contain, Complain, Attain, Domain....
But like i said, it's all practice, you'll look back on this in a few years and laugh
its cool...good lookz
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GO GET SOME YOUR OWN STYLE, GO GET ONE.
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First verse barely rhymed. If E gets the win, give it to him for imitating people.
nice dude
I listened to that battle again. you better keep rapping man, this tracks a couple months old, so get something new out. dope freestyle man, but try writing about stuff you've never heard in rap before, try to develop a style. In a couple of years you'll look back on this track and be amazed at how much better you are haha
get a notebook and start writing rhymes. It only helps. Writtens are the weapon, freestyles sharpen the sword. For 13, your pretty good man. keep at it for sure.
Hey dude.. yeah nice battle we had and im hoping you'll be wining the competition!
And yeah i have got better and better recently and i'll hopefully be bringing out a new freestyle!
Thanks again.
word.
pretty dope son. ur flow can definitely use some work, but nice, unique shit.
my suggestion? get an empty notebook and write rhymes as much as possible, if ur serious about it. if not, keep doing this for fun, because it is fun lol
cheE7
dopee beatt gunner. those vocal samples at the beginning are what did it.
insanely awesome spur-of-the-moment vocals, man. always the highlight of any track you tear up
fucking ill
i love that shit that comes in at 0:12. So fucking dope. I wanna get on this man.
YESS FINALLY.
and likewise gas. great battle dude. I'm glad the comps moving again.
damnnn
both came mad hard. i think exceptid had the iller disses, but murda had the flow. Exceptids thing where he immitated murda was hysterical. i give this to exceptid.
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