nice dude
I listened to that battle again. you better keep rapping man, this tracks a couple months old, so get something new out. dope freestyle man, but try writing about stuff you've never heard in rap before, try to develop a style. In a couple of years you'll look back on this track and be amazed at how much better you are haha
get a notebook and start writing rhymes. It only helps. Writtens are the weapon, freestyles sharpen the sword. For 13, your pretty good man. keep at it for sure.