GloineFiodh's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[microphone]]

getting there

your getting better, but a few things.
this is still really hard on the ears. when you try to dual up your voice, it doesn't sound all that hot because one line doesn't sync with the other just right. Also, a few bars just don't sync up too well with the beat. (I love the beat choice btw, alc is epic)
But that Infinity and Beyond line I really wasn't feeling, but other ones I could really get behind like that 20 bulls. Still, I don't feel like your putting as much time into your lyrics as you should and thats whats really holding you back. Once you write a flawless verse, the other problems kinda smooth themselves out. Again, all I can tell you is keep writing and try not to spit the same ish everyone else is spitting. Keep your game unique. Don't be on a higher level, make your own motherfucker.

THEICONICICON responds:

thanks man i like the review! yea i noticed that when it came to writing this type of style felt kinda natrual for me....so im sticking with this..my own style lol. so im guessing when your saying its too hard on the ears i should lower down my vocals?anyway i like the last quote...

[Lejin - 'Ah' (Thank you)]

damn son

you really suck at rapping hahah.
why do you think your so ill? all yur fans are just alternate accounts haha

Lejin responds:

Lol even exceptid doesnt care about your emotions hahaha

Pop a painpill

"Ah --a 10/10?!?-- Tank u Tank U" XD

- Mr. Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
- Almighty Records (2010)
\--------R.O.F.--------/
~Facts Kill Frauds~

[Lejin Freestyle(TRUTH)]

YOU WEIRD FUCKING FAGGOT

I CANT BELIEVE THIS, YOU MADE THAT MANY ALT ACCOUNTS? YOU THINK PPL ARE STUPID? SO ON THIS GAY ASS BEEF SHIT, WE GOT STEALTH THE GEEK, JARRET THE BUM, PARKER THE TWIG, CAJELLY THE SHEMALE, LIEZO THE WELFARE COLLECTOR, AND LEJIN, THE SKITZO WHO TALKS TO HIMSELF ON ALTERNATE ACCOUNTS AND ACTS LIKE HE'S GOT MAD "FANGIRLS". YOU SCARE ME, ONLY BECAUSE IM FRIGHTENED THAT YOU HAVE THAT MUCH TIME ON YOUR HANDS TO LOG INTO THAT MANY ACCOUNTS, REVIEW YOUR OWN SHIT, AND RESPOND TOO IT! YOU MAKE ME LAUGH.

Lejin responds:

Kid you lost the competition against Exceptid. You need to accept reality and quit crying about it. You will never be on an epic level such as mine hence I was a Judge. Respect your superiors.

Better luck next year kid. Looking like fucking krakker from blues clues overe hear keyboard banging hahaha little scrazy bitch ill break you if You were somebody on here but your still less than nothing.

Go do your homework noob.

- Mr. Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
- Real-Over-Fake -(Approved)

[16 Bars of Heat by P.]

type: filthy

dirty lyrics..
scrub em mother fucker.
keep writing, your well on your way back

P-Balla responds:

Yeah man I'm hoping to write another 16 tonight. Thanks for the review brother.

[HW - Haywyre 300]

more butter

that smooth shit. haywyre is unstoppable. good shit dude. i dig those solos too, but the beat alones enough for 10 stars. check my latest submission, finally
o.0
-Cynic

haywirehaywire responds:

Thanks a lot man, if you want the instrumental hit me up, and ill check it out right now.

[Horny]

Pretty dope;

I really dig the vibe, but your lyrics and flow could use work. You got dope sound though man. My advice to you, is the same to all aspiring lyricists.
Get a rhymebook, and fill the bitch up. When you get to the last page, read your first and laugh at how bad you used to be.

Pmiller responds:

Thanks for the advice man. Means a lot, from you. I've been writing actually since 8th grade. Thing is, I think I'm trying to focus on delivery, and just Having a good time while I do it ya know.
-Pmiller

[NGRBC R1- Exceptid Vs. Haynayy]

good sound.

but again i still feel like sometimes you just dont even try to rhyme.
"Hometowns, Austin, Texas where you buttfuckin horses"
you don't rhyme with horses at all. sounds good though.

Exceptid62190 responds:

yeah bro, idk i guess rap, your technically supposed to ryme. i ryme some of the time but i like using words that sound simular at the end. its just my style i guess. haha. its just something i had adapted to over the years. when i read alot of artists lyrics and poetry, they dont always rhyme. its just the style people go for. and i choose to not rhyme every time. im a weird fuck. :P

[Lejin - Nah ya can't stop me]

gloine sounds so what?????

i cant stop your ass if i dont know wtf your saying son. shits weak.

Lejin responds:

The only thing stopping on here is your very short ending run in the trounament. Sorry kid better luck next year. No i dont have time to give you rapping lesson :\

You lost at the hip hop competition so you have every right to be upset with hip hop NG's #1 artist. Your shit is light out of all the new rappers you are the most obsolete disappointment. Sorry kid this aint for pushovers, you'll never be eminem just quit cause there is only one. Stick to the only think nerdy krakkers like you are good at. Lord of the rings.

Shout out to a true MC tournament gladiator who worked his way up WAY HIGH past what youll ever ammount to: Exceptid rembaressed you.

The truth hurts krakker, Go pop a painpill. =D

<<BANG>>KO!!!

- Mr. Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
- Real-Over-Fake -(Approved)

[Sugar - Dureagon]

my goodnesss.

dope dude. definitely some 9th wonder shit in the making. i feel like it could use some more sounds, but than again i love it the way it is. this is mad professional.

DJDureagon responds:

Thanks for the review. Some more sounds? ehhhhh maybe :P

[One Minutee]

its ight.

good sound and flow. lyrics definitely need work man. their dope in the beginning, but you definitely fall off in the second half as far as lyrics go. sometimes i can't hear the rhyme you were going for too.
"Oncoming of Cynical Principles"
mhm..
also, being popular isn't everything man. 50's one of the most popular rappers, and i think he's trash. just saying.
p.s.= battle terrorcatta if you think you'd murk him. he's tight.

Exceptid62190 responds:

thanks bro! :). i know being popular isn't everything though. i just do this shit for me, and for example this song, i just wanted to try something new. i like doing new stuff on each one of my songs. but thanks for the review. not a 50 fan either :P. i dont listen to that much rap actually. im more into, indie alternative or techno stuff :P haha