Really love the sound,
And it definitely sounds like a Dilla beat, but I can't help but hear some off tempo hits on your hi-hat type thing going on. Maybe lower it? Or just look at it? Or maybe I'm just going crazy... I love the sound either way, great sample.
hmm...I'm pretty sure I made everything on tempo. One thing I do with my hi-hats however is to have, volume-wise, one high and one low alternatively to emphasize the kick and the snare. It does give it a bit of "off beat" flavor, but I promise you it's not. It's just stylistic choice.
I'm glad you still appreciate the beat though! Thx!
does lejin have to annoy every good rapper?
so fucking wack.
I love this beat dude, the hook is mad nice too. The beginning second verse only bugs me because you rhyme a lot of similar words which is fairly simple to do. Quality is tight, all together a nice track man. Good luck in the competition
I agree, the rhyme scheme at the first 4 bars of the second verse are fairly simplistic. I do it that way on purpose sometimes because with a lot of my music I tend to be what they call "wordy". It's a pain to have to revert to a more simplistic rhyme scheme now and then, but it helps me to not use every word in the dictionary lol. Appreciate the review fam, and good luck in the competition as well.
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Pretty dope lyrics too man. Good to see you in the competition
Word bro. Same.
Oh fuck yes
This shit is so tight. I didn't know what to expect with such an eerie and strange intro, but the vocal sample and those bells are immaculate. I like the drum beat as well, not too complex as to not over shadow all the samples you have going. The clap every 2 beats is nice and consistent to ensure easy vocal recording. I love it man. One of your bests.
Means a lot my dude. Its an odd one. The intro was there to attract attention but now i cant imagine the rest of the song without it.
more one syllable rhymes
I don't need permission to address you, you are not almighty. You get a power trip on Newgrounds. You cant even rhyme more then one syllable, ONCE, on a minute and a half track. Good beat though, wait, that wasn't yours. So respond with more personal insults even though you know nothing about me instead of actually defending your raps. LEMME GUESS
POP A PAIN PILL THE TRUFF HURTS.
You need permission from someone before you can address me, I am Almighty and you are less than nothing. I am Power on hip hop NG. You are nothing and you will always remain a nobody after suffering that humiliation at the hands of J-Kellz's little homie in the hip hop tournament. You need to do your homework because you are clearly lost to who I am and how much I am capable of johnny crakker. Just because Icon finished you doesnt mean you gotta be upset with Hip Hop NG's #1 artist because its obvious this is what you wish you could be.
And dont forget. The truth Hurts, just Pop a painpill.
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ive heard this.
and it is still ill shit. I love this joint man. Nice and smooth, kicks hard after you introduce the sample. when you stay on that chop and the strings play out it really comes together nicely. Stay Producing
its nice
good flip, but that hi hat really gets to me. I feel like a more consistent hi hat would fit this better than the two hits you have. Good sound regardless though. Like the ambient vocals you have in the background, pulls it all together nicely
good suggestion, thanks
dope
your flow is a little weaker than your current shit. but i love your content, always seems like despite your lack of multi syllables you can pack a song with meaning. Your vocals always show emotion, good shit red. Nice seeing some old stuff from you, and this beat is masterful. This song is what got me into the underground scene. Illadelph is like the sun, keep writing man
"The Underground is like the moon you only see us at times
And at times we're like skies when the stars recline"
Yeah, I still I gotta work on some more complex rhymes. I'm getting better but it's still what I'm working on, albeit without sacrificing meaning of course. More practice needed!
Next time I do a cypher track or something of the sorts you should get on it!! I'll keep you in the loop.
come on iconic
dont get in on this stupid beef shit. weak
You not built for shit. Remember your place.
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- A-GANG (Almighty Records)
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