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dope puns, your flows pretty off though. got mad syllable hiccups, but you make it sound ok i guess. keep writing.
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dope puns, your flows pretty off though. got mad syllable hiccups, but you make it sound ok i guess. keep writing.
ty sir, i kno wut u mean. and I sure will=D thanks 4 the review=)
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that beat is fresh. the lyrics are decent, and the production is mad tight. It sounds good, you could just do a lot more with your rhyming.
word
Pretty good, cool theme. Funny song, but your rhymes are pretty simple. The second verse has some more substance i feel, but less flow. The beats pretty sick though
danke!
OK.
Ill beat, but the lyrics were mad iffy. It sounds fine, and thats fine, and it has a message kind of, so thats good. But you could do so much more with your rhymes, every syllable counts. Check some of my shit.
I like the lyrics
The beats ill, but your flows just off. I appreciate the message but your flows mad sloppy so it just sounds off. The hooks pretty catchy though, keep it up.
It's all good, I love honest reviews and if you weren't honest then you wouldn't care. Honestly though, I really can't find what's wrong with my flow. I'd imagine that you would do it differently but this is just how it came out in my head. Thanks for dropping the review, stay up.
Beats Illin
Sick beat, but the rhymes are just ok. Your lyrics are pretty good but your flow needs some work. You should also record it all in one shot. good job i guess
thanx i guess...http://poyzenjam.newgrounds.c om/ <-the beat and many more of his can be found here
Oof
Buttery man. Straight fire. One of my favorites of yours.
thanks man
Age 33, Male
Joined on 10/7/07