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The beats pretty crazy, and so is your rap. I get that you were trying to rap fast, but that doesn't make up for the lack of lyricism. As far as the verse goes, it was consistent one syllable rhyming with pretty average lyrics. I recommend listening to some Big L and Nas for a while and listen to how they establish their lyrics and rhyme scheme.
Hot Track.
Nice sampling. Love the drums and when the piano kicks in. Tight stuff.
Flawless.
Thanks for the review man!
Oh Boy!
do i have a treat for you amigo. stickin to the roots. nice oldschool.
pumpin' bass.
Shoot to chill, I dig that. this sounds a little more modern then old school, but it's still ill. good stuff.
Thanks bro
So good.
So many kids making such sick beats on NG. It's UnBelievable. good shit.
one love.
Dope.
Sick rhymes. You had a pretty consistent flow throughout the whole thing. Keep rhyming.
One Love.
grazie
The dopest flowshift.
I love how this switches up dude. This beat is intense, i did get dusted. Word up to the cat with the iron lung. Check out mah shit.
One love.
Def. original.
Good lyrics, tight flow, and mad props for that originality. One of the most solid tracks on newgrounds with a homemade beat and lyrics. Check out my shit and keep em coming.
One Love.
Dope.
Nice piano beat dude. Love the drums. Really dope shit. I never knew newgrounds had such sick producers. Keep ditc kid.
One Love.
Word up.
I like it, good flow. The 3rd verse was sick when you spit that shit mad fast. The first verse i thought was kind of wack, but you gotta start somewhere. Overall, tight flow, nice feel, and decent lyrics. Check out my shit.
aight aight, like ya honesty.. it waaaas a Aim away message so i didnt really sit and write >.>
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