GloineFiodh's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gears of Stickwars]

It was ok.

Not the best Gears of War tribute. I was liking it until about the corpser scene. Thats when you got lazy. You drew the corpser terribly at some angles. Shotguns were shooting automatic. It just wasn't good. I also didn't see a lot of the game in there. You should of had more references. I only recognized the lancer, corpser, and the 4 main characters. It wasn't great, but I didn't hate it. I would recommend spending more time on drawings, and thinking out your animations more throughly because most of the time, I couldn't tell what was going on. Overall, not great, not horrible, just think out your scenes a little more. Good luck.

[Sdl: Sasuke Vs Dairyu]

Looking good.

I thought I saw two similar names. Not too shabby. I liked your other one a little bit better. It seemed like you had put a little more time into it. I'm sensing a mini series with this maybe? I like to see characters reused in short little animations with different plots, like spikevalentine's speed animation series.

[Sdl: Sasuke Vs Kurou]

Pretty good.

I like your comic book style into animation. You have very stylish graphics, sloppy but well animated. That was a killer fight scene you had in there. Keep up the good work.

[x-falcons opening 1]

Good for a first

I'm glad too see someone new submitting a first submission thats original. I really liked your black and white style. Some tips would be to take more time with your drawings. Make your characters look a little different, reflect their personality into the character. When a character is walking. Try not to just have them slide, have them in a walk cycle. If your still new to flash and having trouble, put something infront of their legs. I've been using flash for about 3 years, and I still have some trouble with walk cycles. You have alot of style with your animation, which is great. I recommend practicing just frame by frame work and tweens in random flashes, don't upload them to newgrounds or anything, and see what you learn. When you get good enough, come back to this X-Falcon idea. Nice for a first though, take this into consideration. Best of luck to you. Welcome to Newgrounds!

alemuji responds:

i will definitely take that into consideration...thanks for the tips!!

[Radioactive Rats]

Very good

Great for a first! Congratulations. Some things to improve on. Animation could have been better. The scene where the rat is sliding down the ramp on the cube, the lines to show his speed should have been more frames. Also, at the end, no audio really bothered me. I really liked your idea here, and it was nice to see such a good ending. Excellent job. 8/10, 5/5.

[It's Over Nine-Thousand!]

Funny

Pretty good. I liked your drawings. They were very funny. I would have liked to see more of your own animations instead of just still images. Still, very funny. Keep up the good work.

[roboWalk]

Awesome animation

Not much else. You have great talent with drawing and animation, but wheres story development. I'd like to see more from you for sure, but in the next one, take everything you did great in this one, and expand. Good luck to you, and I will be looking for your next.