GloineFiodh's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[City Royale I]

Not bad

Not a great fan of sticks, but I liked your approach. I liked how you took a new take by attempting at some different camera angles, but sometimes I couldn't tell what was going on. You have really great ideas and are a great director, but you need to spend more time on drawings. I suggest you buy a wacom pad if you haven't already and learn to draw better environments and characters and animate them more fluently. Overall, not bad. 7/10, 4/5. Good luck

Dossfilm responds:

thanks so much for the review.

and yah i've thought about getting one, but they are just too damn expensive. Even for a used one.

but thanks alot for the support.

[Gerudo Trouble]

Great

I love Ocarina of Time. You had great humor in there, but the drawings weren't as nice as they should of been with a drawing pad. Seeing as it's your first submission with one though, you'll get used to it in time. I hope to see more from you in the future though!

LinkXRetro responds:

thanks, yeah i am still getting used to it

[Deezy_Steel]

I like this style.

Changed up the background, made the fighting a little sloppy, like making the arms a little longer. You had extremely smooth and brutal fighting, all though it seemed a little one sided at times. And the ending was awesome. Good luck to you.

[madness weapon tester]

Very good for a first.

You have a nice idea here, though your just copying a style. Your animations are silky smooth, and you have a nice menu. Maybe make this more interactive, like choosing the amount of enemies, or making some weapons fail and having jesus get killed. Also, make some of the animations run longer and have stuff happen to them. Like a gun jam or something. Well, best of luck to you.

[C.O.S. Part 3]

It was ok.

Smooth animations, but things didn't seem to flow right. I liked your attempt at some cool camera shots, but most didn't shine throw all the way. The overview scene of the cars was terrible, sorry it just was. And it was very long. All in all, you should maybe try to keep the camera in one place, or have less jumps with it. You still have a nice flash, but it could be much better.

[Sprite A Day: 23]

Funny

I've been watching these and I've wanted to start sprites. Maybe soon I will and I'll do it here. I only really laughed at Meatwadsprites, the rest were very entertaining though. MeatwadSprite you have an amazing sense of humor. I'm guessing that was a stab at Tim and Erik at the end, and you also are a talented voice actor. THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE.

[Hare and the Tortoise.]

A few problems

The scene where the Hare is running over the hills in the start, when he runs by and we get a glimpse of him, not just smoke clouds, his legs didn't move. I hope you weren't just lazy and that theres a glitch. Also, very nice work with text scenes, like an old cartoon. I personally think you should have done black and white to fit that mood. Few spelling errors, and I also caught on too how dumb the Hare looked. Overall, it was a nice retelling of the story. Good job, and good luck too you.

[TANKMEN - The Machinima]

Whats the appeal?

At first I thought it was 3d, so I had very high expectations, but then I realized it was just a Halo film. It was nothing great, you could of at least done something more original with flash maybe. I don't think that this is the place to be uploading Halo movies even with Newgrounds related content. Regardless, next time, try using your own story and if your going to make a parody, think outside of the box. Good luck and good try.